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Arnold Is Numero Uno
01-01-09, 4:43 pm
Hey fellas, These are a few pics I sent in to teenbodybuilding.com for their contest. Wish me luck!

To the point....can you guys offer my some criticism of my strong and weak points...gotta know where i need to improve...thanks guys!

ohh, and If I win...I am DEF going to give props to universal in my answers...and If i dont win, Universal is still the greatest!

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2025.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2029.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2031.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2032.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2038.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2074.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2079.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2088.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2091.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2103.jpg

Carpe Diem P.T
01-01-09, 4:50 pm
lookin great. keep up the good work. how long you been at it?

Arnold Is Numero Uno
01-01-09, 4:54 pm
well got into bodybuilding soph year of high school.....started doing it right (eating right) senior year of high school and I had a shoulder surgery december 2007 that put me out for 5 months....so I have be training the right way for a total of about 2 years i guess

Pizzalamp
01-01-09, 5:24 pm
i think u look good
very symmetrical
i would say just work on increasing your size over time and beef up your neck!

JeremyT
01-01-09, 6:18 pm
Everything looks great, nice and proportional. The only thing you might want to consider is beefing up your traps a bit. That would add some nice size to the top of your back, and make you seem a little more beefy from the front.

BryanSmash!
01-01-09, 6:45 pm
Upper body looks good, but it's hard to get an overall sense of your physique if your wheels are cut out of every picture. 2025 shows the most legs, but an Ab and Thigh pose would be better.
I see a little bit of Arnold, and Sergio Olivia in your poses, which scores points in my book, but you should take an in depth look works best for you.
I think pic 2091 is your best shot. Take care to remove the red eye though. Also be aware of your tightness in your facial expressions.
Also, and it may just be me, but I think your choice of color for you posing trunks is too dark for your skin tone. Maybe a dark blue instead.
Good luck man, you've got a solid foundation for a bright future!

Arnold Is Numero Uno
01-01-09, 7:03 pm
Upper body looks good, but it's hard to get an overall sense of your physique if your wheels are cut out of every picture. 2025 shows the most legs, but an Ab and Thigh pose would be better.
I see a little bit of Arnold, and Sergio Olivia in your poses, which scores points in my book, but you should take an in depth look works best for you.
I think pic 2091 is your best shot. Take care to remove the red eye though. Also be aware of your tightness in your facial expressions.
Also, and it may just be me, but I think your choice of color for you posing trunks is too dark for your skin tone. Maybe a dark blue instead.
Good luck man, you've got a solid foundation for a bright future!

You're right about the Arnold and Sergio...Arnold is my fav obviously...as for the legs, we couldn't get the lighting right for them to look good so I kinda left those ones out

Dedicated2Liftin
01-01-09, 9:30 pm
Hey fellas, These are a few pics I sent in to teenbodybuilding.com for their contest. Wish me luck!

To the point....can you guys offer my some criticism of my strong and weak points...gotta know where i need to improve...thanks guys!

ohh, and If I win...I am DEF going to give props to universal in my answers...and If i dont win, Universal is still the greatest!

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2025.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2029.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2031.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2032.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2038.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2074.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2079.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2088.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2091.jpg
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm77/rahaye/100_2103.jpg


Impressive chest and good cuts along the midsection. Best of luck, hope you tear it up Animal style.

Little Z
01-01-09, 9:38 pm
i think u look good
very symmetrical
i would say just work on increasing your size over time and beef up your neck!

agree with Pizzalamp..

and once you get some better lighting toss up some shots of your wheels..

keep it up bro!

prowrestler
01-01-09, 9:38 pm
your weakness is in the yoke

get the traps up, thatll add what your lookin for

other then that, just work on getting thicker everywhere

pmug0000
01-01-09, 9:48 pm
Your back looks jacked, your chest looks good, and you're pretty cut.
But I agree with others you say your traps could use work. I also think you could bring up your arms and shoulders, and my guess is legs too.
Good luck with contest!

ghost
01-06-09, 10:21 am
beat the shit outta your forearms, traps, delts and abs.....

where are the legs pictures?

you look good, but need to bulk up.